I said I was going to be redoing pages in my journal, so here's the first redo. I started this before my surgery, but it took me a while to pull it back out after that. The past week or so I've been working on it...and again, I finished late at night. Wish I could finish a page during the day, but I don't think that'll ever happen. And as it is late, there may be mistakes that I've missed, so if anyone can spot any, please point them out and I'll take care of 'em:B.
This page could very well spread over two full pages if put in book form, but I thought it pointless to upload one page with Kahvie on it and another page with the candle seperately, so...yeah.
(Note: She's actually laying on a cobblestone floor here, not a wall...just to clear up any questions or confusions on that)
Edit on 10.8.07: Darkened and added a few more shadows and changed the blood a little since some parts were bugging me. Also changed the text a little bit as suggested by ~Light121
your background style is so lovely and painterly <333 ughhh it really brings a soft edge to your sharp characters. i like it a lottt. and in think this page definitely catches my attention more than your old first page. SO FAR I AM PLEASED.
and for teh record i like that font too. nice n simple o:
-- when you are sleeping, you are not dead. even when you are dead, you are not dead.
--
i dont deserve u i have done 2 many things in my life to even think about u i was born 2 steal 2 take not 2 earn even if u luv me i cant find it in my heart to luv u back so i write this in my own blood telling u im sorry
and i lied once again.......
The backgrounds are a hit! It looks so awsome!!!
I love the black and your text and the blood and the candle and everything else. It's so perfect!
--
--------
Zwei Dinge sind unendlich, das Universum und die menschliche Dummheit, aber bei dem Universum bin ich mir noch nicht ganz sicher. (Albert Einstein)
This is great. Perfect.
I feel that every comic page should end with a question or a cliffhanger, and this is done perfectly. It did it much better than the other page1.
Kahvie looks so... blank ):
--
tyoWolf has left the conversation.
That's most unfortunate.
There are a lot of themes that run through the stock gallery many people have similar ideas but they pull them off in different ways. In this series of newsletters we will look at similar ideas but different outcomes.
Daily Literature Deviations is a group that is dedicated to bringing literature to the forefront of the deviantArt community. We attempt to accomplish this by daily featuring Literature artists from around the community that deserve the recognition, but are not getting it.
Each day we will feature 10 deviations from the Literature categories in a News Article. In order to support the artists that we feature, we ask that you the news article as well as check out the individual pieces. We understand that each day you may not be able to check out each and every one of the pieces, everyone has their own things going on. We just ask that you make an attempt to help support the growing Literature community.
When it comes to community spirit, `Rushy is a shining example. From participating in devmeets, to providing positive encouragement to other artists, `Rushy can always be found demonstrating what it really takes to be a true deviant. It's without any hesitation that we are delighted to award the Deviousness Award for July 2009 to `RushyRead More
Devious Comments
Comments
and for teh record i like that font too. nice n simple o:
--
when you are sleeping, you are not dead.
even when you are dead, you are not dead.
--
~ * Pets May Leave Your Sight, But Not Your Side * ~
[link] [link]
--
i dont deserve u i have done 2 many things in my life to even think about u i was born 2 steal 2 take not 2 earn even if u luv me i cant find it in my heart to luv u back so i write this in my own blood telling u im sorry
and i lied once again.......
I love the black and your text and the blood and the candle and everything else. It's so perfect!
--
--------
Zwei Dinge sind unendlich, das Universum und die menschliche Dummheit, aber bei dem Universum bin ich mir noch nicht ganz sicher. (Albert Einstein)
I feel that every comic page should end with a question or a cliffhanger, and this is done perfectly. It did it much better than the other page1.
Kahvie looks so... blank ):
--
tyoWolf has left the conversation.
That's most unfortunate.
--
....... ................ .........................what were you expecting something witty?
--
--
我是一个大苹果。
--
Flapdoodle!
--
I believe in Jesus Christ as my Lord and Savior. If you do too and aren't afraid to admit it, copy and paste this in your signature.
~Goldgrin; Creator of Caelupes
Previous Page12345...Next Page