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©2007-2009 ~Kahvie
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Submitted: August 20, 2007
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I said I was going to be redoing pages in my journal, so here's the first redo. I started this before my surgery, but it took me a while to pull it back out after that. The past week or so I've been working on it...and again, I finished late at night. Wish I could finish a page during the day, but I don't think that'll ever happen. And as it is late, there may be mistakes that I've missed, so if anyone can spot any, please point them out and I'll take care of 'em:B.

This page could very well spread over two full pages if put in book form, but I thought it pointless to upload one page with Kahvie on it and another page with the candle seperately, so...yeah.

(Note: She's actually laying on a cobblestone floor here, not a wall...just to clear up any questions or confusions on that)

Edit on 10.8.07: Darkened and added a few more shadows and changed the blood a little since some parts were bugging me. Also changed the text a little bit as suggested by ~Light121
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your background style is so lovely and painterly <333 ughhh it really brings a soft edge to your sharp characters. i like it a lottt. and in think this page definitely catches my attention more than your old first page. SO FAR I AM PLEASED.

and for teh record i like that font too. nice n simple o:

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when you are sleeping, you are not dead.
even when you are dead, you are not dead.
That's so sad!! Poor Kahvie

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~ * Pets May Leave Your Sight, But Not Your Side * ~
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oh my garsh crap tards! thats awesome XDDDD

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i dont deserve u i have done 2 many things in my life to even think about u i was born 2 steal 2 take not 2 earn even if u luv me i cant find it in my heart to luv u back so i write this in my own blood telling u im sorry
and i lied once again.......
The backgrounds are a hit! It looks so awsome!!!
I love the black and your text and the blood and the candle and everything else. It's so perfect! :D :D ;)

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Zwei Dinge sind unendlich, das Universum und die menschliche Dummheit, aber bei dem Universum bin ich mir noch nicht ganz sicher. (Albert Einstein)
This is great. Perfect.
I feel that every comic page should end with a question or a cliffhanger, and this is done perfectly. It did it much better than the other page1.
Kahvie looks so... blank ):

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tyoWolf has left the conversation.
That's most unfortunate.
wonderful background and layout. I envy your sklils =)

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....... ................ .........................what were you expecting something witty?
wow... its end?

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Wow, I love it so much. Poor Kavs looks in a right state.

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我是一个大苹果。
;; A much more moving version of the two pages, to be sure... I really love how you only used two panels.

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Flapdoodle! :blahblah:
Wow, this is great! Now I really, really, really wanna know the end!

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I believe in Jesus Christ as my Lord and Savior. If you do too and aren't afraid to admit it, copy and paste this in your signature.

~Goldgrin; Creator of Caelupes

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